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Saturday, November 11, 2006

talking to myself

a fading smile
a crying face
a simple thought
i cant erase
a dying mind
a pointless chase
without a goal,
through time and space
a slit up wrist
a flow of blood
is this the end
of the life i've got?
a life so hard
that cant be solved
a living so tough
u want it to stop?
the answer is "no,
this isn't the end,
it's just the beginning
of so much more to come"
i know it's unfair
but you gotta pull through
"why?" you ask
well i'm not so sure
but when i find out
i'll let you know
this is a promise
i vow to you

5 Comments:

At 3:19 PM, Blogger fofsi said...

wow! i got a compliment from the Geegz (the master of teen-[depression]-poems)! i'm so honored! to know what i'm talking about, check out her blog (geegz.blogsome.com)..
thanks ya babe and bout the depressin parts.. well you know what i have to say to that..

 
At 7:11 PM, Blogger * Mori * said...

hey farah!
well i add my voice to geegz's...its a really good poem...depressing in sum parts i have to admit...but u get used to that thru geegz's poems!although it surprises me that a cheerful person like u cud write sth dat depressing...

 
At 9:23 PM, Blogger Gassia said...

I agree with rano and I didn't understand joe :) But i guess I agree with all of the ppl .. fusfus ur whole life is still infront of u ... life sucks for a while and this happens to everyone .. but never turn ur back to life bcoz of one phase ..
So cheer up hon and don't worry ... just SMILE! :)
Luv uu

 
At 4:43 PM, Blogger fofsi said...

I LOVE YOU GUYS SOOOOO MUCH!!!! :')*happy tears*
KISSES & HUGS TO ALL!!!!

 
At 8:54 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

i know i never commented..i'm so sorry, farah.. but c? i am now!!!! :D anyway..
i read this poem b4.. and was happy when i saw it here.. becoz i reallly like it .. es ist so ne neue struktur oder andere art halt, die mir gefaellt...
dennoch hab ich was zu dem, was alle anderen gesagt haben, zu sagen.. naemlich die deprimierende formulierung.. oder stimmung allgemein. ich bin eher der meinung,dass diese gedanken normal sind, solange du nicht vorhast sowas zu tun...( i know u dun want to.. walla do u :S??!!) aber ich finde, dass die verschriftlichung solcher gedanken.. eigentlich positiv ist.. da du indirekt dich von solchen gedanken befreist... so sehe ich es zumindest... fa deshalb ist dies ein mittel solche gedanken einfach loszuwerden... fa es ist nicht so schlimm.. ich kann dich auch ganz gut verstehen; ABI...
und nochmal.. i love the poem.. i jst like it ... keda... very nice ya fusfus ya habibty!!! mwa (sorry for the long coomment) bas begad good job

 

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